Wednesday, July 24, 2013

Giraffe on a Raft: First (2) in Mike's by Mary

Giraffe on a Raft
acrylic
Mary Stebbins Taitt
in Mike's
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Gerry Giraffe, kneeling fore, not aft
paddled a raft, his favorite craft,
with a hearty laugh at the cooling draft
while his friend Danny Deer, always sincere
and full of good cheer, steered from the rear
sipping root beer.

or

maybe just

Giraffe paddled his raft
kneeling fore, not aft,
whole his friend deer
steered from the rear.

For a kid's book I am working on.

1 comment:

Moleskine.Exchange said...

Love that Giraffe, such majestic animals.