We don't have much spare time, so if there is commenting to be done, I may not do it until we get home.
I tried to alter Steve's work as little as possible while creating this collaboration.
I don't have my scanner with my so I took this with a little point'n shoot--it's really darker than this.
You can click on it to see it larger.
We recently read Moby Dick and A Logbook for Grace (Plus all (most of) the Arthur Ransome books).
If you look back at Steve's work, you'll see that I altered very little. I added two small boats and defined the whale a little--if you look at his you will see the whale was already there. I just clarified it a little.